Speed is the key.
Comments on improved segment 2:
I see that you chose to not adjust the camera in Link's Hut. Good choice.
You had perfect movement up to the hole, good work!
First flaw: Your roll into the corner after getting the first blue rupee in the Kokiri Sword area. Still barely lost a sec.
Second flaw: A little time lost from not backwalking up to the chest perfectly. No biggie.
Rest of the Kokiri Sword area was excellent, besides the roll near the end.
You were very lucky with the bushes, and you picked all the rupees up without trouble.
The movie ends abruptly while you're backwalking towards the river...
I see that you chose to not adjust the camera in Link's Hut. Good choice.
You had perfect movement up to the hole, good work!
First flaw: Your roll into the corner after getting the first blue rupee in the Kokiri Sword area. Still barely lost a sec.
Second flaw: A little time lost from not backwalking up to the chest perfectly. No biggie.
Rest of the Kokiri Sword area was excellent, besides the roll near the end.
You were very lucky with the bushes, and you picked all the rupees up without trouble.
The movie ends abruptly while you're backwalking towards the river...